Latest Editing List

QB Edits:

Doomsday chapter: Change reference to King Bee to Grand Prince, spouse cannot outrank the reigning monarch

Vespidarian Special Forces are called the Hornets

Penta/Go Bio: Also has a containment field around her fusion core.

Leah: Add that she wears a metal skull mask for intimidation purposes and to make her look more inhuman. Remember to add the line about Cthulu running for president in Smiling Demon

Princess Bee 1: Edit Zazzala's sticky note to Elana. Incorrectly lists Annabelle as not having wings

Twins Resolution chapter: Leslie is dead, accidentally mentioned her. Switch to Karen

Villain Dates: Bella: Have Elana play Bad Girl by Avril Lavigne when she and Bella have sex

Shoe Store chapter: Change Kate's weight 1250 lbs

Witch Queen: Change Tara's DOB to 1990

Check Song Link for Hate You/Love You

Catching Night Fright: Batgirl: Quinn? I thought you were retired? I am. I'm her psychiatrist, we're doing an... Exercise...

Zazzala bio: Technically she's more of an Empress than a Queen

Dreadnaught main cannon called Ragnarok Cannon

Check where Codex is linked?

Circe: Xozalla daughter of to Xozalla vi Korll

SBFFs: Edit Batgirl's joke to "I am vengeance! I am the night! I am Batman!"

Wave the white flag: Zazzala's you gotta be kidding me is missing quote

Chapter 2: Popnote still says lipstick lesbian

Chapter 3: Bea says you be wise...

Prisoner of War: Recoil... Change to inexperience

Canary: Last sentence missing quote

Plutia first line, missing other quotation mark

Biyalian War: Megan's love ya needs quotes

Aunt Vicky: About time missing quotes

Suit Up: Zazzala's second line missing quote

Buzzy Joins the JL: Weird period (Immediately noticeable)

Rebellion 2: Ace dropS targets

Also only has one option but two paths

Cursed Sword I: Check Zatanna's spells

Demon Prequel: Fix eyes to eye and scarf to bandana. Upgrade Eva's evil speech with info from notes

Demon IV: Eye waters, not eyes plural. Bionic

Demon V: Scarf to Bandana

Conclusion: Change to technically the second time in my life I've been raped

Captain Becky: Pulls of her stockings Also MISSING OPTION 2!

Poison Ivy "Now if you WOULD..."

ComeS back with a spray bottle

The comma in Leslie's first line

Failed rebellion 3: How jou say to 'ow jou say, also missing quote after extreme hair

Makeup: Bea: You look like a Raccoon anyway "I was going for Avril Lavigne you bitch."

Allison: So you're really the princess? (Missing quote)

SBFFs should be hip button

SBFFs II Datapad not datpad

Supergirl 3: After following to couch, does curtsy

Eva speaks German when she is PISSED.

German: Let me down you perverted abomination!

Adopts German accent to slightly seduce Elana and get her to behave better

Elana dog tags Atheist, Lucinda... Satanist?

Elana is a Registered Whale Biologist from her time spent at Wendy's xD